I know it isn't great, but I'm still not perfect. Comments?

Well, the cropping needs some work and the effect on the city is not too great.

Overall, I would just suggest putting more time and effort into your walls.

Overall, I would just suggest putting more time and effort into your walls.

Give him a break. How do you know how much effort and how long it took to come up with this? I do remember some of your first efforts and these are easily as good.

Wsox08, your starting to get the hang of the "technique", now think a little more about the "design".

Edited May 2, 200619 yr by DePloderer

Give him a break. How do you know how much effort and how long it took to come up with this? I do remember some of your first efforts and these are easily as good.

Wsox08, your starting to get the hang of the "technique", now think a little more about the "design".

Well, I didn't mean effort as in what he put into it but I meant effort as in techniques like experimenting with different stuff. And you are most definitely right, my first wallpapers were s*** compared to this. Just giving constructive criticism.

hang of the "technique"design".

i wish i could get a hang of both...