September 5, 200421 yr I've started a screenplay, and for the first time in awhile, I'm really excited about what I've stared. I'm hoping to get some other opinions, so I put what I've wrote so far onto the internet. PDF | Text Only If you read it, be honest in your opinions. I can take it, believe me.
September 5, 200421 yr I like it so far. I see shades of Pulp Fiction in that you talk about uncomfortable silence and Anthony says "what?" a lot like that dude in P.F. when being interrogated (who eventually gets shot b/c he says "what?" too many times, lol).
September 5, 200421 yr i thought that maybe when clem came out it was going to turn porno on me and a three way was about to start
September 5, 200421 yr i thought that maybe when clem came out it was going to turn porno on me and a three way was about to start LMAO me too.. There were actually a few times I thought things like that would happen.
September 5, 200421 yr I've started a screenplay, and for the first time in awhile, I'm really excited about what I've stared. I'm hoping to get some other opinions, so I put what I've wrote so far onto the internet. PDF | Text Only If you read it, be honest in your opinions. I can take it, believe me. i tried to read it and i have never read what a script is suppose to be like. so i don't know what to look for. in all honesty, i hope this come to be, i hope you get all the success you want. if it was a book, then i can give you an opinion. good luck peace
September 5, 200421 yr Author if you want bobdylan we can turn this inot a porno quite easily Maybe I'll write a second version.
September 5, 200421 yr Author i tried to read it and i have never read what a script is suppose to be like. so i don't know what to look for. in all honesty, i hope this come to be, i hope you get all the success you want. if it was a book, then i can give you an opinion. good luck peace Reading screenplays is different, it certainly takes more of a visionary reader. The way I learned to read them was to watch a movie, and read the screenplay.
September 6, 200421 yr I liked it so far but a quick question, I know its not finished so it might get explained later, but how does Anthony get back in touch with Cheryl if the number was incorrect and he keeps getting the operator? Side note, the beginning reminds me a lot of Eternal Sunshine not necessarily a bad thing.
September 6, 200421 yr There are about 10 new pages, if anyone is interested. its hard to say if its good because i really dont know where you are going but it seems good
September 6, 200421 yr Author I liked it so far but a quick question, I know its not finished so it might get explained later, but how does Anthony get back in touch with Cheryl if the number was incorrect and he keeps getting the operator? Side note, the beginning reminds me a lot of Eternal Sunshine not necessarily a bad thing. It'll be explained later. : ) And much of the inspiration is from Eternal Sunshine.
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