Crazy ass thread. First of all, if you're going to write anything that you want to be recognized, it needs to be reviewed. Hell, Jason is at the top of his class at Fullerton and he still confuses some words that I knew in first grade. My writing needs to be constantly reviewed because everyone makes mistakes. It's a two-edged sword posting it here. First, you took the step to see what others thought. Second, you're gonna get bashed. I don't know if I'd state your age, mainly because they might not care what a 16 year old thinks. Establish yourself as spending money at the ballpark and you have concerns. That's how I'd go about it. Just be professional.